請教高手，譯這樣ok嗎? 感謝!!

因為對你愛無怨尤，所以不能成為朋友。
Love without the hatred to you, so can't become a friend.

你選擇別人是你的選擇，我選擇你是我的選擇。
Your choosing other people is your choices, my choosing you is my choice.

愛的時候，認真經營；不愛的時候，彼此祝福...
Time of loving, earnest management；The time don't loved, each other blesses.

「即使我們不能一起幸福，你的幸福，也會是我的幸福」
"Even we can't be together happy, your happiness, will be my happiness"

心疼的故事太多，無法禰補什麼，
The story of heartache is too many，can't the Ni repair what，

完美的愛情成了遙不可及的夢，
The perfect love became unreachable dream，

跟了誰，
Heel who，

無論幸福與否，都要承受自己當初朦朧的執著。
No matter happy or not,all want to bear oneself to persist at the beginning and hazily.

天下最幸運的事，莫過於你愛上一個人、而他正巧也愛你。
World the most lucky matter, fall in love with a person,
and he to also love you by a happy chance in you nothing is better than.

[ 本帖最後由 robert1984 於 2007-12-28 23:19 編輯 ]

這是用翻譯軟體嗎
實話是 非常糟糕....火星英文嗎

是詩嗎? 最好以涵義來翻譯比較妥當
翻譯軟體通常都以字與詞來翻....到最後都看不懂了
來幫你一下
另外有一些句子太短  如果就這樣翻譯的話涵義不會完整或是跟前後的句子不合
我會打**來標識這些句子 不過我還是會幫翻一下
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你選擇別人是你的選擇，我選擇你是我的選擇
Whom ever you choose is your choice. My choice is you.

愛的時候，認真經營；不愛的時候，彼此祝福
When you love, be faithful, truthful and considerate. When it ends, give the other your blessings.

「即使我們不能一起幸福，你的幸福，也會是我的幸福」
Even though we can not be together. Your happiness is also my happiness.

**心疼的故事太多，無法禰補什麼
Heartaches are too many to count; unable to mend anything

完美的愛情成了遙不可及的夢
The perfect love became unreachable dream
(這句翻的ok, 不過我會翻成 The perfect love only became wishful thinking. 這須要看前後的句子與具體的含意來做調整)

**跟了誰
Who followed who?

無論幸福與否，都要承受自己當初朦朧的執著
Regardless of achieving happiness, you still have to be responsible for your muddled persistence that started it all.

天下最幸運的事，莫過於你愛上一個人、而他正巧也愛你
The luckiest thing in the world has to be you loving a person and them/him/her (看含意來做調整) loving you back.

選擇幾段另譯 希望通順 翻譯不是很拿手 請多指教 謝謝

你選擇別人是你的選擇，我選擇你是我的選擇
You have a priority to choose whomever you want to be with, but you are my choice.

不愛的時候，彼此祝福
When love is gone, unconditionally giving the best wishes to each other.


**心疼的故事太多，無法禰補什麼
There were  too many heartbroken (or painful) stories; however, none of them was  possibly able to mend.

完美的愛情成了遙不可及的夢
This  flawless love has become an unreachable dream


**跟了誰
who should we follow?


天下最幸運的事，莫過於你愛上一個人、而他正巧也愛你
The luckiest thing in the world must be you've found that the one you love and he also fall in love with you.

[ 本帖最後由 conscience07 於 2007-12-31 23:44 編輯 ]