非常急的英文翻譯問題~請高手幫幫我~

下面的文章是我想的，這篇是我在校內英文演講比賽要用的，不過很多地方不確定，請各位厲害的大大幫我校正以及翻譯

先謝謝一樓的大大，我的學習是指像是全方位的，所以我想應該也是 LEARING 會比較好
我又重新修改，這樣應該會有一分鐘了吧，不過總覺得有些地方不通順！！哈哈~ ~''


題目：what is the most important thing in your life now ? Why?

i think learning is the most important thing in my life now? i'm a student,so learning is important to me. I can know a lot of things  and understand these things by learning.Francis Bacon ever said that 'Knowledge is power.  [and the knowledge comes by the learning] (知識就是藉由學習而得來的) so learning  is the most important in my life.Once i were born until die, i always learn everyday and everywhere. Because i can not leave learning. i also say that learning is water and air. Once it leave me,i may missed a lot of things that i should know.It is namely'live and learn.'No matter now or future，learning always is the most important in my life .

[ 本帖最後由 robert1984 於 2008-3-1 15:51 編輯 ]

study 通常是指在學校裡或教科書上的學習, 最常用於準備考試上
"知識就是藉由學習而得來的" 應該用LEARNING 比較好~~要加ING喔

但是看你的文又有點疑惑,不知道你要強調的是去學校的學習呢?還是日常生活上的學習? 說白一點,你的話題沒有重點! 可不可以把你的題目一並PO上來, 這樣可能會清楚一點

可能念1分多鐘至兩分多鐘嗎?  說實話~~20-30 秒就唸完哩
你可能要多寫一點

JACK

建議修改如下：
I think learning is the most important thing in my life now. Why? Because I'm a student. I can know a lot of things  and get more knowledge from  these things by learning. Francis Bacon ever said that 'Knowledge is power'.  [and the knowledge comes by the learning] (知識就是藉由學習而得來的) so learning  is the most important in my life. Once I were born until die, I always learn everyday and everywhere. Due to I never leave learning, I also say that learning is water and air. Once it leave me,I may missed a lot of things that Ishould know.It is namely'live and learn'.No matter now or future，learning is always  the most important things in my life .

the suggestion is not quite right i think. i'll see if i can improve it a bit. but it might not be correct either.


"I think learning is the most important thing in my life right now. Why? Because I can gain a lot of knolwedge from learning. Francis Bacon once said that Knowledge is power.  Since we obtain knowledge by learning, therefore learning is of utmost importance. From the day I was born until the day I die, I will always be learning. Learning is as important to me as air and water.  Learning is, and will be the most important thing in my life."

原帖由 oakhc 於 2008-2-28 09:15 發表
建議修改如下：
建議修改如下：
I think learning is the most important thing in my life now. Why? Because I'm a student. I can know a lot of things  and get more knowledge from  these things by learning. Francis Bacon ever said that 'Knowledge is power'.  [and the knowledge comes by the learning] (知識就是藉由學習而得來的) so learning  is the most important in my life. Once I were born until die, I always learn everyday and everywhere. Due to I never leave learning, I also say that learning is water and air. Once it leave me,I may missed a lot of things that Ishould know.It is namely'live and learn'.No matter now or future，learning is always  the most important things in my life .

i think learning is the most important thing in my life now? i'm a student,so learning is important to me. I can know a lot of things  and understand these things by learning.Francis Bacon ever said that 'Knowledge is power.  [and the knowledge comes by the learning] (知識就是藉由學習而得來的) so learning  is the most important in my life.Once i were born until die, i always learn everyday and everywhere. Because i can not leave learning. i also say that learning is water and air. Once it leave me,i may missed a lot of things that i should know.It is namely'live and learn.'No matter now or future，learning always is the most important in my life .

my version (同樣視學習知識) 類似 自己想像 盡量不要一直重複類似的句子
the old Islamics  has a old saying. they say "knowledge is key to power, wealth and ultimately success." as a human, we have been learning since the day we were born.
we are who we are because of knowledge. through time, it had taught us ethic, moral, facts, and justice. and all these leads to our achievement in life. that is why i believe knowledge is the key.