請問narrative essay要怎麼寫?

以下是一篇範例，請告訴我hook和conclusion在哪
還有narrative essay 該怎麼寫?
A Scary Secret
        My sister and I made a dangerous mistake one summer. I was thirteen and my sister was fourteen, and our parents had taken us to the city where they grew up. We felt very grown up as we rode to the hotel in a taxi. The hotel was very big, and it had a blue tile floor. After we unpacked our suitcases, our parents wanted to go to the Markey. My mother told us not to go outside. “We won’t,” my sister promised, but I knew that she was lying. We had already decided to go out and explore this strange and beautiful city by ourselves.
        As soon as my parents were out of sight, we got our things and went downstairs. We walked out of the hotel doors and down a narrow street. The sun was setting, and the light was very beautiful. We could hear the noises of traffic nearby, but the little street was quiet. Suddenly, a man with a gun stepped out fro a doorway. He said, “Don’t move!” He was short, and he was wearing a dark green jacket and sunglasses. He said, “Give me your shoes.” So I did. Then he took my sister’s purse and her gold ring and ran away. I remember that I fell against my sister. I heard her take a deep breath; she was shaking. Afterward, we ran back to the hotel, across the blue tile floor and up to our room.
        The man scared us, but he also taught us something important. Before this experience, we did not always listen to our parents. We now learned that we should obey them. My sister and I became obedient daughters, and we enjoyed the rest of our vacation. However, we decided not to tell our parents about our adventure. We knew they would punish us even though we had learned our lesson. This dangerous adventure is still a secret that I share with my sister.


[ 本帖最後由 robert1984 於 2008-3-17 20:48 編輯 ]

Hook - My sister and I made a dangerous mistake one summer.
Conclusion -  The man scared us, but he also taught us something important. Before this experience, we did not always listen to our parents. We now learned that we should obey them.

This is just a brief concept of how to write a narrative essay?
Par.1 Hook and Introduction
Hook makes readers start guessing about what will happen next.
Par.2-4 Body
Containing most of the plot (the supporting information)
Par.5 conclusion
Conclusion can have 2 functions:
1. It can deliver the moral for the story, or tell the reader what the character(s) learned from the experience.
2. It can make a prediction or a revelation about future actions that will happen as a result of the events in the story.

I hope it helps.

雖然說不是看不懂，但是要寫這類的文章總是有點棘手
沒有在加強這方面的地方，真不知道該怎麼努力才好

hook is correct on the first floor
but conclusion:This dangerous adventure is still a secret that I share with my sister.

Basic concept of narrative essay:
1.usually about story
2.have clear indication of 5Ws(Who, When, Where, What, and Why)
3.Usually a story with a general priciple or aim
4.Actions need to fast and consistant(or the reader gets board)
5.Don't write too much of your own opinion(no one gives a shit...)
6.Do not drag
7.Good luck on your writing

Thanks your ideas.
總覺得越來越沒有力氣看英文了。
I feel my English not working.